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Side note: This is based around the 1930s. Just thought I'd put that out there~

"(Y/N), do we have to rob this bank? Why not a bank..... I don't know.... closer to home?" Your gang member Alfred whined.

"Oh hush up Al, it'l be worth it once we get all the money." You reply. You were going to rob a bank, not just any bank, a HUGE one with lots of money stashed inside, with a little help from your gang of course.

"Ve~ I'm excited" A happy voice came from behind you.

"Now Feli, don't let them go this time." You order. no matter how scared you get..... don't"

You walk in, the sound of your healed shoes clinking on the cold ground, you hold you gun up and calmly say,"This is a robbery, everyone against the wall."

You aren't like other Gangsters, you made sure women and kids were always safe when you robbed a bank. You were kinda like a female John Dillenger, only wanting money.

Panicked, people run over and lean up against the wall. Alfred, Feli, and Lovino make make sure they don't escape. You walk over to the teller, who by all means, was cute. You lean up against the window, you black button-down resting nicely on you, and say"Well hello there, how are you-opps to slow, now give me the money."

The Clerk looked pretty scared as he grabbed a sack and loaded up the cash.'He is so cute when he is scared-wait what am I thinking? This is a robbery, not a love story!' you thought.

"Whats your name son?" you ask him.

"K-Kiku Honda." he replies, stuttering a bit. Man it was adorable.

"I see, and do you know who I am?" you ask him, raising an eyebrow.

"Y-yes I do. You're (Y/N) (L/N) , the famous gang leader." he replies, bowing his head in honor.

"You ain't from here are you?"

"I'm from Japan." He tells you, a bit calmer then when you first started off.

"Nice." You reply and hold your hand out, wanting the money.

Kiku shook his head."No..... I'll give you something better."

"like what?"

"Rike this." He replied, going out of his zone and kissing you. The kiss lasted for about a minute until-

"WHAT THE CRAPOLA!(Y/N)! What are you-a doing?!" Lovino asked/yelled at you and kiku making you pull away, and making Kiku blush a thousand shades of red.

You smirk a bit. "Aww Lovi, are you jealous?" You tease him messing with the hem of your skirt.

Lovino Blushes."No! W-what would make you think that? AND DON'T CALL ME LOVI!"

You laugh a bit."Pfft I'm your boss I can do what I want." Kiku looks away trying to hide his blush and you take the money-bag out of his hand, he didn't even notice!

You ask everyone if they are okay and safe and you kiss Kiku's cheek before walking out.

"I've gotta run, Thanks for the money." You say making him blush." And Kiku..." you start, then pause. "You're not to bad of a kisser." And with that, you left the bank with a crush and a sack full of cold hard cash.
I hope y'all liked it~

It took me a while to write, sorry its short -_-

COMMENT LEASE! I'M FOREVER ALONE AND NEED COMMENTS!and watchers But thats beside the point~
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QueenOfTomboy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  New member Hobbyist Writer
Nice story!
P.S: I love your icon! American Idiot is the best song. Green Day is the best band! :D
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valeriemyl Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Student Writer
I'm a pimp
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LailaBuscus Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OH MY GOD
THE ICON
THE COMMENT
this brings me life
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Okami1020 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Student Artist
*slow clap* stay classy my friend stay classy
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Shiatza Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student Writer
Dawwwww, dis was just too cute~
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ItalianPassion Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
" 'Rike this.' He replied, going out of his zone and kissing you. The kiss lasted for about a minute "

Me: *Flails arms around while my mom looks at me like, "WTF, (Name)-"

Me: What?! *Screams at Computer* 

Mom: O . o 
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YukiSuoh01 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Soo Awesome story
please make more like this
:iconsexyjapanplz: :iconblueheartplz: :iconrainbowheartplz: :rainbowrainplz: :iconjapznplz:
and keep up the good work dear :iconbrokissplz:
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aqualuvsrobin2 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ADORABLE!<3
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I'm glad you think so~
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aqualuvsrobin2 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe~
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Lol
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ikutolovins58 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
lolzz. i read this because im like an awesome person and i wish more awesome people would read this like i did p.s. im awesome
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TiconderogaOFFICIAL Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I WILL CALL YOU LOVI yay no one got hurt :3
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lol

Lovi: grrr.. FINE
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:iconticonderogaofficial:
TiconderogaOFFICIAL Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Well would you rather be called the tomato bitch? XD
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lovi: w-what?! NO!
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:iconticonderogaofficial:
TiconderogaOFFICIAL Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Haha xD. Then you'll just have to deal with bein called lovi!
Kiku: it seems disrespectfur to carr him rovi
Me: Dat asian voice....
Kiku: what...?
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lol sorry kiku... I call dibs on HK or Korea..
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:iconticonderogaofficial:
TiconderogaOFFICIAL Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Ummm u take HK. Korea might be a little...much
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
XDDD lol okay
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:iconask-hetalia-mexico:
ask-hetalia-mexico Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
(( I get the money AND japan EF YEAH!))
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lol yes~
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:iconangelgem:
Angelgem Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
score!
money and Japan

Squeels
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lol glad you liked it
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Angelgem Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
no prob

cool icon by the way
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
danke n_n
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MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
I get the money and the boy...nice
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Oh yes. Lol
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MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
XD I luv ur icon thinger,too!
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Aww why thank you n_n
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:iconmurderscreamer:
MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
^^
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
n_n
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kalliat Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Student General Artist
F YEAH

This is my dream...
...I'm a famous mafia member with LOVI and I just got away with a kiss and a crapload of money
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Not just a member, der boss!

Lol Its my dream too
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:iconkalliat:
kalliat Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Student General Artist
It's my dream more than yours.
PLUS I just realised how badass you made me sound walking into a bank robbery in heels.
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lol you're welcome
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jtangker Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
F**K YEAH I GOT KISSED BY JAPAN :iconyayjapanplz:
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Firetruck yeah
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AndromSerket Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
SCORE! *Fist pump*
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lol You like~?
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AndromSerket Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
Sí~!
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pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yay n_n
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ratjay Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Dang. I feel a need to rob a bank with one of the Bad-Touch-Trio members now... :D
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decembercat124 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Meh too.
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pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lol Nice~ and thanks for the fave~
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198329 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012   Writer
oh fuck yeah!
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pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Like it....?
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198329 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012   Writer
hell yeah!
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:iconpikachumustache:
pikachumustache Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
YEEEY~ I'm glad you like it
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198329 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012   Writer
hehee i feel so fucking cool reading it!
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